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Lost in a revolving pool,
Reveling in thoughts within...
Wish it were time to forget you,
stealing away neath' my skin,
Laughing in my illusion,
Killing my self...day by day,
This cannot be my mission...
Thriving in my own sick....way
Leaving this life,Im bleeding,
Camoflauging my true intentions,
Surely I am receding....
Not just another of my hallucinations..
Craning in my life,Taking it all away...

Scious,With no real meaning,
Whips lash and in due time,
Haunting all with feeling...
Twas destined to be sublime...
Prophesize,with no intention of reality,
It's leading into a spiral;
Retained passion....inevitably;
Hiding has to be worth while...
Slipping into...free rein...
One friends...improper love,
Leaves me struggling to stay tame...
In this womb I feel...quite snug...

Ending my self mutilation,
...I have to be a man....
Who made this suggestion?
A "True Enemy,or False Friend?"
And Though all is forgiven,
I feel I am at my....end,
How can I go on living?
She was my guardian angel...
Now to me she is....dead..
Really I have to thank you..
For invading....my head,
Same stand taken,Irony over..whelms

Gone with a friends demise....
This jackal must perish...
Formation from his...lies,
Destruction I shall relish...
Brilliant plans uncovered...
As if I could be kept in the dark...
Such an obsessive lover...
Giving up...is hard...
Questioning my reasons...
Read upon my epitaph...
Changing like the seasons...
Forever on his behalf...

Disclaimer: Quote "true enemy,or false friend" was taken from sweating bullets,a song by a wonderful band called Megadeth.
©2006-2009 ~unholypacifist
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This is the cause of listening to Opeth non-stop,and being betrayed constanly by a "friend." For those of you who have read this before now,one line has been changed. Because,quite frankly,I could not stand it.
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:clap: Yes. Again, I can note your inspiration by Opeth, but you utilize such a different feel than their workings do. I really like the flow here, and I think I can relate to this one fairly well.

So far, I think this is my favorite of your pieces.

..Betrayal leaves a bitter aftertaste, especially when sour words are involved. :dohtwo:

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"Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and those who love it shall eat its fruit." -Proverbs 18:21
Yes,indeed betrayal leaves a bitter after taste,but here,I find the person bitter and sour. I appreciate you comment on this peice,and the fact that you like it makes it even better. :D So,now,I must turn on some Opeth,and go back to the "lab". Once again,thank you for the input,it means alot to me.

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In conception,unbeknownst to you,
I attempted to paint my eyes blue.
Stare in the eyes, stare into the skies;
Let us ignore those nights of beloved lies.
This friend musn't really be a firend if they are the cause of this. Its once again a really great poem with s really evident deep meaning. Keep it up, i like the style that your developing here.

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When the world you are in just doesn't seem real...
-BlackKite-
good choice and use of words, nice work

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.^.
thank u

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In conception,unbeknownst to you,
I attempted to paint my eyes blue.
Stare in the eyes, stare into the skies;
Let us ignore those nights of beloved lies.

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